Pursuing and Educated Mind
Quesiton 3. The evidence in this essay was alot on personal experience and ideas but the writer did back up her opinions and statements with book research from reliable sources. I thought the personal experience brought al ittle emotion to the paper which was good, however the writer was experiencing this from afar and did not personally deal with the effects of ESL programs nor did she ever state what the girl thought about the ESL program so the book research as evidence holds stronger for an argumentative paper.
\Question 4. The section headings divide the paper up for the reader and i think the purpose it serves is to have a better organized paper and also if the reader wants to skim and find the exact information they can read the section headings and skip right to it.